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The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:52 pm

My community story! It is being posted!

I got this idea from a girl I know on a site. (Yes I'm being vague on purpose~) I asked for permission to use her idea, and she was rather enthusiastic. :D In fact, I'm linking her to this once I post this. :lol: (Before you ask, she's fine with me not saying who.)

I wanted to have chapter one to post at the same time, so I sent out the form early to several people. (Thank you guys so much~!) Spent the past week on it (so much writing -twitches-) and had to write everything from the form onto paper just about so I could work on it at school, and the whole things gonna be written on paper an then typed, so that will make for slower chapters.

Chapter Links~
Prologue - *points down*
Chapter 1 - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639#p10289
Chapter 2- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639&start=15#p13087
Chapter 3 - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639&p=16677#p16678
Chapter 4 - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639&p=38523#p38523
Chapter 5 - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639&p=53931#p53931
Chapter 6 - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=639&p=86048#p86048

And now for spoilers because long things are long.

Prologue: Read before choosing a form!
The Pokemon Facility for Amon research (PFAR) are working on a project, one that "fuses" humans and Pokemon together to create another species that they call the "Amon". Everything runs smoothly until a sudden explosion happens and hundreds of Amon escape and run away. Many tried to return to their normal lifestyle but were instantly tracked down and brought back to the PFAR.

The GARP is made up of advanced technicians, scientists, soldiers and of Amon themselves who did not or were unable to break out of the facility at the time of the explosion. The purpose of the GARP is to gather all the Amon, and return them to the PFAR.

This happened around eight years ago, and not all the Amons have been gathered, not all survived.

Form #1 = Amon
Form #2 = Normal Trainer


Please PM them to me. I like to use tiny details and turn it into huge plot. And it will keep this clean.

Form #1:
Basics
Name: Preferably your Forum or Chat name. (If it is normal, if not please make up something normal.)(Normal: No numbers, no abbreviations, etc.)
Age: age you want to be in story, anything above 8yrs old is good
Gender: Because sometimes I just forget.
Pokémon: No legendaries (Note: This is the Pokemon fused with.)
Ability: Originality please, and it should relate to the type. (Note: Not the Pokemon’s ability.)
Weakness: Weakness in abilities to be specific please, try to use pokemon rules here. (But not strictly type.)

Personality: As much as you can think of.
Region: (Will be across all five, doesn’t have to be from there, just where you want them to be/be heading to.) (Note: No RL places.)
History: IMPORTANT TO FILL.
History can teach me more of the personality so I can write you decently. Write before/during/after of being at the PFAR.
Current Occupation: I get the fact most of the people are on the run... so, what are you doing though? Or do you work for the GARP? Or do you want to let me decide? (Note you can also do more specific for a sub-plotline between your characters.)
Appearance: I will even accept green hair! It's pokémon afterall! (Pics for reference if you want/can. Please don’t use the main characters from the games.) (Note: You don’t get to choose physical changes due to being Amon. You can make suggestions if you want though, I don’t want like 10 people with wings, and most shouldn’t be that dramatic anyway.)
Clothes: If you're in GARP then all you have to do is type 'uniform.' (Anyone else will need to fill this in and give colors as well.)
Accessories: Bag? Watch? Hat? Anything else?
Other: Anything else you can think of.

Party (Note: Please just copy-paste for as many pokemon you have.)
Pokemon Min of two, max 6. (Can use the fused Pokemon.)
Type, gender, and nickname(if it has one): Once again, no legends.
Personality:
How you got it (eg trade/captured in wild):
Attacks (min 3, max 6):


Form #2:
Basics
Name: Preferably your Forum or Chat name. (If it is normal, if not please make up something normal.)(Normal: No numbers, no abbreviations, etc.)
Age: age you want to be in story, anything above 8yrs old is good
Gender: Because sometimes I just forget.
Stregnths:
Weakness/Fears:

Personality: As much as you can think of.
Region: (Will be across all five, doesn’t have to be from there, just where you want them to be/be heading to.) (Note: No RL places.)
History: IMPORTANT TO FILL.
History can teach me more of the personality so I can write you decently. Write before/during/after of being at the PFAR (if they knew about it) .
Current Occupation: So what are you doing? Or are you one of the trainers in the GARP? Or do you want to let me decide? (Note you can also do more specific for a sub-plotline between your characters.)
Appearance: I will even accept green hair! It's pokémon afterall! (Pics for reference if you want/can. Please don’t use the main characters from the games.)
Clothes: If you're in GARP then all you have to do is type 'uniform.' (Anyone else will need to fill this in and give colors as well.)
Accessories: Bag? Watch? Hat? Anything else?
Other: Anything else you can think of.

Party (Note: Please just copy-paste for as many pokemon you have.)
Pokemon Min of two, max 6.
Type, gender, and nickname(if it has one): Once again, no legends.
Personality:
How you got it (eg trade/captured in wild):
Attacks (min 3, max 6):


As referenced in both, yes you can make as many as you want. I actually have five, and three early people have two. If you're making more than one, you have to make at least one of each. I encourage you making as many as you want. (Because I'm gonna need tons of both.) There will probably not come a point where I will refuse to take characters. Exceptions are ignoring bascially the only rule, No Legends or if there's not enough for me to work with and I'll tell you so.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:00 pm

Chapter 1: To Cause Mass Confusion And Interest And Not Explain Anything!

“I know there’s an electric Pokemon here somewhere...” Belwen muttered, glancing behind her worriedly as she pushed past branches and bushes, sensing the electricity in the air. “Where the heck is it?!” she demanded angrily. I’m out of electricity, lost, forever away from home. and being chased. Can this day get worse?

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Gokai grumbled to himself as he crawled through the air vents, “Why is it always me? Yes I can glow so I can see where I’m going, but why not send Sky? He has night vision and won't be given away by it.” He continued to mutter, indeed glowing as he continued looking for a specific room. “And where is it?” he demanded angrily.

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Ivy hummed to herself as she searched for plants for Erika, glancing up at Akai, her Pichu, often.
“Chuu!” Akai would respond every time from his spot on Ivy’s Fedora, cheeks sparking lightly. Causing Ivy to reach up and adjust the hat every time. The Pichu grinned before abruptly straightening, listening closely.

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Lincoln, or Link as he prefered to be called, grinned as his opponent, a teen younger than him, sent out a Pidgeot; sending out his Raichu in response.
“Air Slash!” his opponent commanded, unfazed by the electric type.
“Dodge it and use Thunderbolt!” Link quickly responded, his Raichu darting to the side with speed achieved through much practice before sending off her attack.
“Dodge it with Quick Attack!” the other squeaked out after a moment, his Pidgeot faltering for a moment before dashing forward in a burst of light.
“Wait for it to get in close then Thunder Punch it!” Link commanded, watching it closely.
“Rai!” Raichu nodded already charging the attack throwing it forward as the Pidgeot slammed into her first, kicking up a cloud of electrified dust.
Both trainers waited for the dust to clear, at last seeing the result of the attacks, Pidgeot lay unconscious, and Raichu standing somewhat stunned but strong.
“Good battle.” Link said to his opponent, who smiled sheepishly back.
“If I knew she knew Thunder Punch I wouldn’t have used Quick Attack, of course, that is the fun of Pokemon battles though.” he replied, recalling his Pidgeot and waving as he walked off.
Link smiled down at his Raichu, petting her before recalling her and heading back to town.

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Stephany scowled as she brushed some of her dark tri-colored hair out of her eyes, placing her black cell phone to her ear and listening to the dial tone eerily silently. Finally there was a beep as the other picked up.
“What’s taking you so long? You said this time yesterday!” she growled into the phone.
“I’m sorry, she noticed me before I could do anything!” came the angry retort, “Don’t speak to me like that!”
“I’ll speak to you however I want, Murtas, you’re still below me, no matter how others treat you, you’re still just a spoiled brat, just like her.” Stephany replied cooly, glaring at several scientists walking by.
Murtas growled audibly before abruptly hanging up.
That kid, honestly, he thinks he owns the place. Stephany scowled, going down the hall. How hard is it to catch my 16 year old sister?!

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Murtas glared at his red cell phone before shoving it into his pocket and continuing through the forest. “That woman, I could kill her.” he growled, “And she made me lose her!” he snarled, glaring angrily at the forest before taking a deep breath and listening closely, hearing the shifting of branches to his right, quickly taking off that way. Get back here!

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Gokai grinned to himself as he finally ended up in familiar territory, knowing the room he was searching for was the third on the left down the hall before him. He extinguished the light emanating from himself as he continued, soon being in the room and carefully removing the grate. It came off with a small popping noise, causing him to freeze in place, staring at the door in growing horror at the sudden stop of footsteps.

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“What is it Akai?” Ivy asked, tilting her head at the tiny mouse.
“Chuuu!” her Pokemon hissed back, a clear ‘shush!’ as she had ever heard from him.
Ivy blinked before attempting to hear whatever had upset Akai, hearing a faint rustling and gripping one of the Pokeballs on her hat.
As the rustling came closer she released Purin. “Be ready to use Hyper Voice.” she commanded quietly, the Jigglypuff for once behaving and turning towards the noise.
Abruptly, a Shiny Snivy burst from the bushes, causing her to sigh in relief and laugh slightly before realizing it was looking back and waiting for something or someone. She barely processed this before a figure burst through the same bushes and Purin immediately used Hyper Voice.
“Gods! Call your Pokemon off you idiot!” she yelled, hands over her ears as she fell to her knees.
Ivy gasped as she recognised the brown, green, and blue hair. “P-Purin! S-stop!” she squeaked out.
Purin ignored her for a moment before slowly stopping the attack, Ivy quickly recalling her.
“God I’m so sor-”
“You had Purin of all your Pokemon out and keyed for Hyper Voice?!” the angry tri-colored hair girl snapped. “When did you become insane? I know I am but you weren’t the last time I saw you!”
...She’s furious... Ivy thought, blushing slightly and looking away slightly.
“And why didn’t you realize it was me?! I realized it was you awhile back but I couldn’t change direction and, and...” she took a deep breath.
“Bree I’m sorry! I didn’t realize anyone was coming, let alone you! And it was Purin because I don’t have as many Pokemon as I used to.” Ivy explained.
“Are my ears bleeding?” Belwen - or Bree to her friends - asked quietly.
“Err...” Ivy paled slightly at the blood.
“I take that as a yes. This is sooo not my day.” she muttered, her blue and star shaped tail winding upon itself in her frustration.
“What do you mean?” Ivy asked, eyes following her tail as they always did.
“No time, I need some electricity!” Bree hissed as there was more rustling in the distance.
“Wha-Why?” she asked, backing up a step.
“Why do you think I was running? Hurry before he gets here!” Bree replied, grabbing at her hand, causing sparks to fly between them.
“Wh-” Ivy was cut off as a dark haired man burst into the small clearing.
He grinned, “Experiment one-four-zero-three has found experiment one-dash-one-one-seven-two, we’ve been looking for you for a long time.” he said cooly with a smirk.
Ivy shifted nervously, hiding slightly behind Belwen, her Pichu sparking at the man.
Belwen growled at the man, thrusting her arm towards him, electricity crackling around her arm before shooting out at him, immediately followed by a Thunder from Akai.
The man, Murtas, stood up, sizzling slightly, glaring at them. “Now you’ve made me angry.” he growled, stepping towards them.
Ivy glared, “And you have us!” she snapped, throwing her arm out, electricity crackling before sending a Thunderbolt at him, followed by a Charge Beam from the Pichu still on her head.
“Nice one!” Bree commented slightly jealously. Why am I the freak with a tail and almost no power?! she thought annoyed.
Ivy smiled somewhat awkwardly at her as she let go of her hand, and started heading to the road.
“Sorry about that, I was freaked out.” Bree said softly.
“Nothing to worry about, I would be too.” Ivy replied, adjusting her hat slightly.
“Where’d you get the hat by the way? You didn’t have it before, so its not GARP made.” Belwen asked.
“Gift from a friend, you might remember him, Gokai.” Ivy replied, looking over at her curiously.
“Gokai! I remember him for sure! You don’t just forget someone with the same fused Pokemon.” Belwen replied, “How was he?”
“He was far better than the last time we saw him; had control of his glowing too.” she said with a slight giggle, remembering how he used to always be glowing like he was radioactive.
“That’s good, though a slight shame we don’t get to call him radioactive anymore.” Belwen replied, “...I thought he had us there for a moment.” she commented.
“You’re telling me! I thought I was about to die!” Ivy exclaimed, “Who’s your Snivy by the way?” she asked tilting her head slightly.
“Oh! This is Hebi, got him from my cousin.” Belwen replied with a grin, her tail threading through the air comfortably.
“Athena? She wasn’t...” Ivy trailed off slightly.
“No, she sent him to me as a birthday present when she found out I wasn’t dead after my disappearance.”
“Sni!” Hebi chirped, climbing up her leg and curling around her neck.
“Where have you been anyway?” Ivy asked, tilting her head.
“Been hiding out on Mt. Silver, remember the old hang out?” Belwen replied.
“Mt. Silver?! That’s days away!” Ivy exclaimed, stopping.
“I was being chased.” Belwen shrugged, “I’m gonna head back if you don’t mind, I’d love to stay with you, but I left a lot of loose ends and people waiting for favors or filling them out. I gotta get back ASAP.”
Ivy opened her mouth to respond, but was cut off by their Pokemon growling and looking back towards where Murtas had been.
Where exactly are you going?” he growled, rising, “You. Are. Going. To. Die.” he snarled, sizzling even more than before.
“Forget what I said about Mt. Silver. RUN GIRL RUN!!” Belwen yelled, shoving Ivy down the road to get her moving and running off after her.
Murtas chuckled darkly, swiftly taking off after them at inhuman speeds. Run as fast as you can little lambs, it won’t help you one bit.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:02 pm

Author's Notes: Long chapters will be long. The Stephany that appears is not PurpleSteph. And it does jump around a lot. I like it that way. And it will be more dark than anything I've seen on here. Meh. Nature of the idea. /me blames ML

Link's is a test to see how I do on Pokemon battles. Tell me if its any good.

Also Sage, sorry for not fitting yours in. I think you'll see how she wouldn't really have fit here. I do have plans for her in chapter two though.

This was 3 pages front and back handwritten and with prologue it was to the beginning of 5 pages on google docs size 11 font.

Its to short dang it >.< I needs more characters ASAP!

That is all.

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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Yoshi129 » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:49 pm

good chapter tini but do you think you can make a list of whos in the story?
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:05 am

I could say the names of the people, but half the fun is not knowing whos who. =) Then you don't base opinions of characters on who you know them as. Though some are obvious; Ivy, Gokai, me, some aren't.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Silverthorns » Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:43 am

~-~ I'll post my form later

But I get dibs on Absol
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby sage-saria » Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:25 am

Tinibree this is awesome!

Firstly dont worry bout not fitting me in, I had a feeling I wouldn't show up until later anyway given my form tee hee ;)

Secondly this is well written, the battle flows quickly as poke battles should do and creates a good change of pace.

I hope to see the next chapter soon <3
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby lucariMew98 » Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:59 am

Oh wow, this looks amazing thus far!

You know, back when I did a lot of rping, one of my favorites parts of the whole process was creating a character bio. And seeing those two forms really has me excited.

I'll fill one out later, as I have intern work to do today. It'll give me some time to think over the looks and such of my character.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Wed Apr 25, 2012 4:09 pm

I still don't think its that good.

And I'm allowing some of the same Pokemon, just not a lot. Me and Gokai are the same (Shinx, but who didn't see that coming?). But if I start getting like five of the same Pokemon, new ones are gonna have to change it to something else.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby LoZCardsfan23 » Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:40 pm

Hey Tinibree, this is a great opening chapter. I like what I'm seeing so far! :)

Can't wait to see the next chapter! ;)
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:49 pm

I'm gonna not start chapter two until sometime tomorrow, I was going to wait for more characters for longer, but Andy made me want to write. Badly. So if you want to be in chapter 2, get it to me ASAP. (Note, at the same time its not guaranteed, but there's a high chance. The sooner you get it to me, the sooner your's will appear.)

On another note, I'll shortly be editing the first post with an example of the first form. (Most people are derping on a couple parts. <3 you still.)
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby GokaiRed45 » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:51 pm

Well I like Tini of course! <3 :3
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Silverthorns » Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:07 pm

Well, I still can't wait for Chapter 2 that and I realized Purin and Hyper Voice.... ~-~
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Tinibree » Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:15 pm

Huh?

Its actually a bit of a private thing between me and Ivy. Its a bit of a reference to how we met, though Sing would've been best, Hyper Voice actually would cause damage. -huggles Ivy-

Just like people that were in Minecraft when the "guild" was created will start to notice a trend as we go on. hehe.
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Re: The Amon Adventures

Postby Silverthorns » Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:27 pm

Oh you don't remember what I put in my form?

Loud Noises (Hyper Voice as an example) could irritate or make my character pass out.
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