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The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:32 pm

Attention!
If I am missing characters in the list below please PM me and I will fix it. In the PM tell me the name used in the story for example "Pie" and what role you think they are for example "The Great Deku Tree" so your PM would look like "Pie, The great Deku Tree"

Ok, so I got my inspiration to do a FFF themed story by Lucari so here is my attempt, This post is just a little teaser I will post as often as I make progress. Yes I know I am a horrible writer.
The Characters I have so far is Rayne/me - Hero
Lucari - Hero
Gokai - Hero
Tinibree - Hero
(MusicalHufflePuff) Aura - Hero
Toon - Hero
DarkWolf - Helper
Neko - Saria
Pie - Great Deku Tree
Zoshi - Mido
Sage_Saria-Navi
AnimeJessica - Zelda/Shiek
I would like more people to fill other roles in the story just let me know so just pm me what/who you wanna be and I will add you, I DO NOT need Ganandorf or any sages
So here we go~!
EDIT: I will be writting the whole story this is just a little intro per say


It is said in the history of Fun For Freedom that 6 chosen heroes picked from the 3 goddess will rise to the challange of defeating the Gerudo man.

Part 1

"Where...where am I?" Rayne said as he sat up rubbing his shoulder. He looked around noticing only trees. There were what appeared to be paths leading in four directions between the trees.Rayne stood up slowly and started to walk towards one of the paths leading out of the current area of the woods. All of a sudden Rayne hears a voice from behind him "wait!" he turns and sees a figure running towards him. "Do...you...know...where we...are?" the person asked in between pants. "No," Rayne said as he went to go and turn but took a closer look at the person. It was a girl, "but I can't leave a girl alone in these mysterious woods, so come on," Rayne finishes and starts to walk away. The new girl runs a bit to catch up to Rayne, "my name is Lucari" she sad. "That's a nice name, mine is Rayne," he tells her without stopping.
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby lucariMew98 » Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:39 pm

I'm inspiring people! xD

I'm very curious as to where you'll be going with this story. Can't wait till the next part! xD
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:43 pm

After wandering around the forest and the many paths Lucari and Rayne start to get tired. "We just keeping seeing the same trees, are we even going anywhere?" Rayne asked. "We have to be we have been walking for hours now," Lucari replied. "Who, who is there?" a strange voice calls out to Rayne and Lucari. "I am Rayne, who are you and why are you hiding from us?" Rayne replied to the voice. Rayne slowly and silently starts to walk closer to one of the wooden paths where the voice seemed to be coming from. "I am not hiding I am lost," the voice echoed back to Rayne. "We are to,, maybe we could find our way out," Lucari shouted from behind Rayne. "We will never get out, they call this area the Lost Woods for a reason you know," the voice seemed to be coming from a different spot then originally. "If we are all gonna die might as well tell you my name, its Gokai," the person behind the voice came out form the shadows. Rayne looked up at the sky, "its getting dark soon we need to find away out soon," he said to no one in particular.

A young girl dressed in a green dress came running towards the group of three, "thank the goddesses that I have found you in time!" she said. "What do you mean 'in time'," Lucari asked the girl Rayne noticed the look on Gokai's face turn sadder. "You mean you don't know?" the girl looked puzzled, "anyone who die in the Lost Woods turn into a Stalfos, a skeleton like creature that will roam for the rest of time! My name is Neko by the way, now come on let's get back to the village," the girl started to walk away then made a waving motion with her hand to signal the group to follow her. The small groupe skepticly followed, "are you sure we should follow her?" Gokai asked to Rayne and Lucari. "It may be our only way to survive, you heard what Neko said about turning into a Stalfos and wandering for the rest of time." Lucari replied to Gokai. After about 25 minutes of walking the group of 4 had reached the end of the paths and appeared on the top of a hill overlooking a small village of sorts.
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:05 pm

The village houses where made of tree trunks. There were about 5 houses and 1 shop. All the inhabitants of the village where kids, "why are there no adults around?" Gokai asked Neko, "because we are Korkiri, we aren't allowed to leave the village but we also don't grow up, thanks to the magic from the Great Deku Tree," she replied. Neko showed Rayne, Lucari, and Gokai around the village. "And you can stay here," Neko gestured to the house in front of them, "also I thought you should know, there is another girl in there we had just found her not long before I came across you three. Rayne was the first inside the house and the others followed. Rayne looked around at all the people around him, The first person he looked at was the first girl he met in the forest. She had brown hair that fell down to her shoulders, she was wearing a casual purple tee shirt with gray sweatpants. Next was the boy they met in the woods. His name was Gokai. He had medium length blonde hair,and wearing a green and tan plad button up shirt and blue jeans. Then there was the girl that came and saved them in the woods, Neko. She had light brown hair that seemed to point outwards and curve a bit, she is wearing a simple green dress that fell to her knees. Then there was the girl sitting on the bed who hasn't said a thing since the group walked in. She had a bit longer hair then Lucari had but the new girls hair was a redish colour, she was wearing a white tee shirt with ripped black jeans. Last but not least there was Rayne. He had about the same length hair as Gokai but Rayne's hair is black, he had a black shirt with deep blue jeans.

"My name is Tinibree" said the girl sitting on the bed. She stood up brushed some dirt off her close and extended her hand for a handshake. Lucari was the first one to shake the girls hand, "My name is Lucari, that's Gokai," she pointed to him, "and Rayne," "Nice to meet you" he said to Tinibree. The rest of the group shook hands with the new girl. "Tomorrow morning you four should go see the Great Deku Tree," said Neko before she turned around and walked away. Gokai looked around the small cabin, there where two beds and four people " what will we do about the sleeping tonight?" He asked generically to the whole group, "Well I say the girls get the two beds and me and you Gokai get the floor," Rayne replied to Gokai. "Are...are you sure?" asked Tinibree "sounds fine with me ," Gokai said as he walked around to a flatter part of the room. "Sounds like a plan then, well we should all get some sleep its getting late now" Rayne announced and sat up against the wall "night!" Tinibree and Lucari both walked to the two beds an the opposite sides of the cabin "night!" they both said at the same time.

(and that is the end of chapter one)
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:45 pm

Chapter 2
The four awaken the next morning, feeling refreshed but out of place. Rayne still in the sitting position from the night rubs his shoulder and stretches. He looked around the room and saw Lucari in one bed and Tinibree in the other. He took a second look and didn't see Gokai "where... could he be?" Rayne whispered to himself and sat up. Rayne silently made his way across the room and out to the village. He walked around looking for Gokai, he walked past the store but because it was still early it was still closed. There where no other people around so when Rayne saw movement he started to run to it. When Rayne arrived to the movement he saw that is was Gokai. Rayne didn't notice at first but there was something on Gokai's back. Gokai noticed Rayne coming towards him "what... what are you doing here? I thought you where asleep." Gokai asked Rayne. "I was, then I woke up, should we go wake up Lucari and Tinibree?" Rayne replied not amused. The two started to walk towards the house where they had slept when Rayne asked "so what is that on your back?" Gokai stopped to look up at Rayne's face before looking back at the ground. "Its a sword, I found it in a chest, I was going to ask the Deku Tree if it was ok if I had it." When the two boys got back to the house they were surprised to see that Lucari and Tinibree were already up plus Neko was there to.

"Oh! There you two are!" Lucari said as she pushed some hair behind her ear. "Shall we go now?" asked Neko. The group walked out of the house and headed to the left side of the village. "Neko! Where are you takiing these newcomers!" Zoshi exclaimed to Neko "there not even Kokari's" he finished. "The Great Deku Tree told me to bring them." Neko replied wiith slight anger in her voice. Zoshi stared at the group befor crossing his arms and walking away. Tinibree looked over her shoulder to see the boy walking away befor running to chatch up to the rest of the group.
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Silverthorns » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:14 pm

Hm....Will I be in this?
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby lucariMew98 » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:23 pm

lol, that's the first time I've ever been a brown head xD

Can't wait to read more!
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:24 pm

Silverthorns: Go to the first post, it says you want to be in the story, PM me the role you want
LucariMew98: You actually like this?
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby lucariMew98 » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:28 pm

Yes I do. The writing could use improvement, though. But, you learn as you go. :)
Just keep writing, and don't be afraid to experiment with different styles, and your writing skills will improve :)
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Tinibree » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:58 pm

I would say you need to use more paragraphs, your supposed to every time the speaker switches.
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"Oh! There you two are!" Lucari said as she pushed some hair behind her ear.
"Shall we go now?" asked Neko. The group walked out of the house and headed to the left side of the village.
"Neko! Where are you takiing these newcomers!" Zoshi exclaimed to Neko "there not even Kokari's" he finished.
"The Great Deku Tree told me to bring them." Neko replied wiith slight anger in her voice.

I personally hate huge paragraphs. If you blink you loose your spot. -_-
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby Hylianhero » Sun Feb 19, 2012 11:28 pm

Thank you for the help I am sorry I am a noob writter but I wanna improve <3
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Re: The Heroes of http://funforfrFreedom [OOT and FFF crosso

Postby Hylianhero » Wed Feb 22, 2012 9:34 pm

The group walked along the grass path. They walked in silence until a suddenly a plant like creature jumped out of the ground.
"Whoa! What is that?" Tinibree said in a almost screaming voice.
"That is a Deku Baba" Neko said in a casual voice "just keep your distance and keep walking they won't harm you then" as she kept walking unafraid of the Deku Baba's.
The other four carefully moved themselves beteween the creatures making sure not to get too close due to no one wanted to get bit.
Once the whole group had safely made through the dangerous path they emerged into a wide opening. In this opening there was a giant tree with what looked like a face.
"This, is the Great Deku Tree" Neko motioned to the giant tree in the opening.
"Welcome." the tree said slowly "I am the Great Deku Tree but you may call me Pie if you wish"
"Ok...Pie? Why did you call us here?" Rayne asked in confusion.
"Good question... the reason you have been called here is because of the prophecy." The tree continued slowly " It is said in the history of Fun For Freedom that six chosen heroes picked from the three godesses with rise to the challange of defeating the Gerudo man." Pie resited by memory.
"Ok?" Gokai said not sure of what to think "but there are only four of us here."
The group started to look at each other. Gokai had a point there was only Rayne,Lucari,Gokai, and Tinibree.
"Aye son. You will meet more friends, people and even enemys along your jouney." Pie said "but now you must go inisde me and vanquish the evil inside of me."
"What! How are we supposed to do that!?" Tinibree asked in extream confusion.
"Like this." As the great tree shook his leaves producing a magical golden dust. As the dust floted down it carried 3 packages wraped in leaves.
"Rayne, Lucari, and Tinibree please take on package each," the tree said in its usual slow voice. "And as for you Gokai, for your bravery in finding the sacred Kokiri sword, you may keep it to aid you and your friends on you journey."
Rayne slowly and carefully unwraped the leaves. When all the leaves where unwraped Rayne say a bow and arrow. The bow was made of a fine wood with fine string. The quiver was made of a brown leather.
Lucari was the next to unwraped her's. In her leaves lay a sear. The spear had the same wooden shaft as the wood that Rayne's bow was made of. The head of the spear was a shiny silver material.
Tinibree was the last of them to open her gift from Pie. Like the others she carfully unwraperd her gift. Once all the leaves where out of the way. The shimmer of the shiney metal caught her eye. what lay in TInibree's gift was two short daggers.Tinibree slowly griped the daggers and lifted them. She held one dagger per hand.
"Now heroes, you must hurry to defeat the evil inside me.... I can already feel my life slipping away." the tree said as he opens his mouth wide enough to climb in.
Gokai looked at the group. As Gokai looked at each person they nodded to him then as one the Rayne, Lucari, Gokai, and Tinibree ran into Pie's mouth.

Authors notes: Sorry took so long to post, school stuff. Also I hope people like this story :| and I took Tinibree's advice for writing :3
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby TeamSkyward » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:21 pm

So far, so good, Hylian ;) I'm really enjoying it so far, even though I'm not in it. But, it doesn't matter, I guess...If you need a male shiekah, let me know ;) Keep it up, Hylian :D
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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby sage-saria » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:37 am

This is great Hylian, keep it up and dont worry bout not posting for a while we all have other stuff to do, if we can get to do it (sorry having bad day)

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Re: The Heroes of Freedom [OOT and FFF crossover]

Postby lucariMew98 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 5:27 pm

I really like the recent one :)

And don't worry about not being to post quickly. One thing I've learned over the years is to take your time. After all, it takes me a few weeks to put up the next chapter for my story xD
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