The Phantom of Nimbasa

[khdarkwolf]

Chapter 1
The music ended. The curtains fell. Another musical in Nimbasa City as finished. The pokemon actors had left the stage and were now returning to their trainers.
"Good work, Oshiku." Renne called to her Dewott. Oshiku stepped over to Renne and grabbed her open hand. The two walked out and went the lobby of the Musical Theater. They were greeted by many fans. Renne signed autographs and Oshiku pressed an ink-covered paw against paper for their begging fans.
The musicals were different than they use to be. Instead of random pokemon dancing, there were actual plays writen and the cast for the plays were not handed out at random. Nowadays, if you wanted your pokemon in the musicals, you'd have to train them to be acting pokemon, and have them audition. Luckly though, for newcomers, the Musical Theater offered lessons, and there was the new Theatrical School for Pokemon and Trainers, the TSPT, which was created to help trainers and their pokemon become stars.
But Oshiku was the real star of the theater, he always had the best roles. In one play, he played as a notorious theif, and everyone cheered as he got away. In another, Oshiku was the hero, saving a poor pokemon from danger.
"Hey, Renne." Someone tapped Renne's shoulder. Renne turned and meet Nathan. Nathan was the trainer of Oshiku's female co-star Sinona, a Cinccino. Sinona stepped over to Oshiku and tapped him also, mimicing Nathan.
"Oh, hi, Nathan." Renne smiled. "What do you need?"
"I was going to ask if..." Nathan stopped. "It's crowded, I don't want to ask you here."
"Is it about the new script?" Renne asked.
"Sort of." Nathan replied. "I'll talk to you when the fans are gone."
"Alright." Renne watched Nathan leave. She felt a tug on her pant leg. Renne looked down to Oshiku. He pointed the way Nathan and Sinona went.
"We'll meet up with them in a bit." Renne reassured him.
The fans had gone and the theather was getting cleaned up. Renne and Oshiku were in the dressing room, getting there stuff together to head out. Oshiku grabbed Renne's cellphone carried it in his two paws.
"Gonna carry my heavy cellphone for me, what a kind gentleman you are." Renne laughed lightly. Oshiku smiled proudly, and followed her out the door. Renne and Oshiku went to the front and meet up with Nathan and Sinona.
"Sorry if we kept you waiting." Renne said when that got over to them.
"It's alright." Nathan replied. "Here." He handed Renne a stack of paper.
"New script?" Renne asked, she took the paper's and started reading.
"Yeah, this one has a stronger female role than male." Nathan told.
"Oh, I see, Sinona's going for lead then?" Renne asked unphased.
"Uh, yeah, I wanted to make sure you got a copy of the script though, the male roles are smaller in this one, just so you knew."
"Yeah, its alright. Thanks though, I can have Oshiku practice a bit before we come back for character auditions." Renne smiled. "Anyways we better get going, I'll see you around." Renne waved good-bye before leading Oshiku home.

[khdarkwolf]

Author's Notes:

This story is losely based on the Phantom of Opera... I'm obsessed, deal with it.

Oshiku is actually the name of my Dewott in Pokemon Black lol

Sinona is what I want to name a Cinccino xD

Story's gonna get better soon, trust me ^^'

[LoZCardsfan23]

This reminds me of the Pokémon episode "Stage Fight!", only without the actress who's afraid of getting shocked by her own Raichu.

This is a pretty good start, khdarkwolf. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

[khdarkwolf]

lol, I haven't seen that episode ^^' I just came up with it when I got to the Pokemon Musicals in Pokemon Black lol

and thank you ^^

[Tinibree]

...oh gosh, Phantom of the Opera....things can only go bad here.

[khdarkwolf]

Well you never know >.> <.<

With a profesional like me things are sure to turn out x3

[sage-saria]

Great beginning Wolfie, I love how you let the chapter completely open as well!

As for it being based on Phantom I don't mind that at all, it was the first musical I saw and we went on a trip on London to go and see it and it was then that I realised that I could do what some of those who have heard my voice call singing, me I call it derping (and guys save the agruement on that for another thread ok)

I cant wait to read the next chapter

[anistii]

awesome story and saria -_- its singing

[Tinibree]

Sage, we voted on this, you are not derpy! -rages-

[SykesLoZ]

Pokemon and Phantom... oddly enough i can see this working out just fine. :3
Definitely looking forward to the rest of it! <3

[Piciman]

Awww.... Dewotts are awesome. Water starters all the way!

[Shiro_k]

wow this is good, i cant wait for the next part ^w^

[khdarkwolf]

Chapter 2

Renne unlocked the door of her appartment and let Oshiku in before her. Oshiku walked over to the table and reached up, placing Renne's cellphone on the edge. Proud of himself, Oshiku climbed into the chair and sat down.
"You hungry, big guy?" Renne asked when she finished locking the door behind her. Oshiku nodded. Renne opened the cupboard and grabbed a can out of it. Oshiku watched her prepare his meal. She placed the plate of cut of fish in front of Oshiku.
Oshiku smiled his thanks and grabbed a piece of fish. He ate his food while Renne made herself a quick salad. She sat down and read the script while eating.
The script was a simple Clefairy tale, aimed at young girls. There was a minimum of seven characters, two being male. Renne read the stage directions for the role she would have Oshiku try for.
Oshiku finished his food. He slipped out of the chair and grabbed his plate. He carried it over to the counter and pushed it up into the sink.
"Done already, Oshiku?" Renne looked up from the scirpt. Oshiku nodded. "Alright, bed time." Renne got up and followed Oshiku to the next room.
Oshiku sat down on his cushion and rubbed his eyes. Renne grabbed his blanket and warpped it around him. Oshiku laid down and curled up. Renne turned off the lights and went to bed herself.
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The next day, Oshiku woke up before Renne. He got off of his cushion and walked into the other room. He walked up to the tv and hit the button to turn it on. There was a morning news report on. Oshiku sat down and starting watching the screen.
Renne woke up after hearing voices coming from the other room. She looked over to where Oshiku should of been. Seeing he wasn't on his cushion, she assumed he was watching tv. Renne didn't know when Oshiku learned to turn the tv on by himself. He just started it one day. It was alright for her because the alternative was Oshiku jumping on the bed to wake her up so she'd play with him.
Renne got up and got ready for the day. She came out of the bedroom, brushing her hair.
"Ready for breakfast, Oshiku?" She asked. Oshiku stood up and turned the tv off. He followed Renne into the kitchen. Renne prepared the food and set the plate on the table. Oshiku sat in his seat and began to eat.
Renne's cellphone rang. Renne turned to grab it but Oshiku got there first.
"Waaa?" Oshiku chimed into the phone.
"Hm? Oshiku? Uh, give the phone to Renne please." The voice came from the phone. Oshiku gave the phone to Renne then went back to eating.
"Sorry 'bout that." Renne said when she got the phone back.
"Hey, no problem. You read the script yet?" Nathan asked.
"Yeah, I might have Oshiku do the Prince." Renne asked.
"Oh, nice. Sinona is going for Cinderella."
"Thought she would be nice for that." Renne laughed. "So Oshiku and Sinona have to work on their dancing then right?"
"Yeah, when would you be able to come to the theater for practice?"
"Well, I gotta stop by the PokeMart and get more MagiBits for Oshiku, and then I can come over."
"Alright, see you then." Nathan hung up. Renne put her cellphone in her purse.
"Okay, Oshiku. Finish up than we're going shopping." She smiled.

[khdarkwolf]

Author's Notes:

Well here's the next part, thanks for the feedback guys =)

Not too much happens in this one =/ Mostly set up for characters and such ^^'

Oshiku's a smart Dewott :3

[Shiro_k]

i love the way you are writing the story (maybe its because i love pokemon >->) but still, i cant wait for the next part to come out! ^w^